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Ashes. Cold. And Tasteless
Sliding down my tongue
crisscrossing my throat
Corrugated patterns
OH! the details
they've weaved
Devils of woe
Devils of sorrow
Profound is this
Hollow hole. Cup. And world
This acid bite
This languishing
This endless toil
This
Ennui's dream
Erisean desire
Had a moment, caught well with a little poem I think
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UsagiTenshi Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm. I like the flow, and certainly your use of vocabulary is perfectly matched with the imagery. I'm a little intrigued at the striking metaphors when applied to boredom. This must have been quite a moment!
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arpellias Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am obsessive about flow...its almost ridiculous lol
I worry about that sometimes, that the imagery would seem out of sync or some such...glad to know that isn't the case.
What I recall of it...I believe it was, I haven't actually been in that state for very long lately tbh lol
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UsagiTenshi Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol. mental and emotional states have a way of coming and going without warning... :iconohyouplz:
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arpellias Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
True true
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